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donate/donate.de.xhtml

@@ -132,7 +132,6 @@ Idealfall steuerlich absetzbar zu machen. Schreiben Sie
     Ihre Spenden erlauben uns zu arbeiten. Wir möchten, dass Sie sehen können,
     wie wir <a href="/about/funds/">ihre Zuwendungen über die Jahre verwandt haben</a>.
    </p>
-
   </body>
 
   <timestamp>$Date$ $Author$</timestamp>

donate/donate.el.xhtml

@@ -144,7 +144,6 @@
     
    <p>Οι δωρεές σας μας επιτρέπουν να λειτουργούμε. Θα θέλαμε να μπορείτε να διαπιστώσετε 
    <a href="/about/funds/">πώς έχουν διατεθεί τα χρήματα στα προηγούμενα χρόνια</a>.</p> 
-
   </body>
 
   <timestamp>$Date$ $Author$</timestamp>

donate/donate.en.xhtml

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
      
      <p id="introduction">
       The Free Software Foundation Europe is a non-profit non-governmental
-      organisation. Our work is made possible thanks to our community of <a
+      organisation. Our work is made possible by a community of <a
         href="/contribute/">volunteers</a> and <a
         href="/donate/thankgnus.html">donors</a>. Your donations are critical
       to our strength and autonomy — they enable us to continue fighting
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
       <b>Supporter</b> of the FSFE.</li>
       <li>Donate EUR 50 every month <em>OR</em> EUR 600 in a year and you'll
       become a <b>Contributor</b> of the FSFE.</li>
-      <li>Donate EUR 100 every month <em>OR</em> EUR 1.200 in a year and you'll
+      <li>Donate EUR 100 every month <em>OR</em> EUR 1200 in a year and you'll
       become a <b>Sustaining Contributor</b> of the FSFE.</li>
       <li>Donate EUR 500 every month <em>OR</em> EUR 6000 in a year and you'll
       become a <b>Patron</b> of the FSFE.</li>
@@ -42,9 +42,8 @@
 		 <li><a href="donate-2007-ch.html">Switzerland</a>: Tax-deductable donations are possible</li>
 	 </ul>
   
-         <p>Of course you can also donate and support the FSFE from other countries and there
-         are many different ways to do this. To find out what the best way for your donation is
-         to reach us and also to ideally make the donation tax-deductable for you, please contact
+         <p> It is also possible to make tax-deductible donations from other countries. To find out what the best way for your donation 
+         to reach us, please contact
          <a href="mailto:office@fsfeurope.org">our office</a>. Generally, donations can be wired
          from anywhere in the world to the following account:</p>
 
@@ -58,10 +57,9 @@
 	 <h3>Credit card and PayPal</h3>
 
     <p>
-	  Sometime it is easier and more convenient for our supporters to use credit
-          card payments for their donations. FSFE can receive payments via PayPal. 
-          When using PayPal, please keep in mind that we will have to pay 1.9% + $0.30 USD 
-          for each transaction.
+	For users who find paying by credit card more convenient, we also provide a facility to pay by PayPal.
+          Please remember that FSFE has to pay fees of  1.9% in addition to a flat fee of $0.30 USD 
+          for each donation received by this method.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -97,7 +95,7 @@
 
 	 <h3>Check drawn onto a US- or UK-bank</h3>
 
-     <p>If you prefer to mail a check instead, you can send it to </p>
+     <p>If you prefer to donate by postal check instead, please send it to </p>
 
      <p class="quote">
             Free Software Foundation Europe e.V.<br/>
@@ -132,7 +130,7 @@
    
    <h2>Cash-Flow</h2>
    
-   <p>Your donations allow us to operate. We would like you to be able to see <a href="/about/funds/">how the money has been used over the years</a>.</p>
+   <p>Our continued operation relies on your donations. We publish details of how donations are spent, and each year <a href="/about/funds/">these details are made publicly available</a>.</p>
 
   </body>
 

donate/donate.fr.xhtml

@@ -113,10 +113,8 @@
   <h2>Autofinancement</h2>
    
   <p>Vos dons nous permettent d'exister. Nous voulons vous permettre de voir <a href="http://test.fsfe.org/about/funds/">comment l'argent a été dépensé au fil des ans</a>.</p>
-
   </body>
 
-
   <timestamp>$Date$ $Author$</timestamp>
   <translator>Michel Roche (Vercors - France), Jil Larner (Mont Blanc - France)</translator>
 </html>

donate/donate.ru.xhtml

@@ -110,11 +110,10 @@
    <h2>Финансовая отчётность</h2>
    
    <p>Пожертвования составляют финансовую основу деятельности ЕФСПО. Информация об использовании средств опубликованы на странице <a href="/about/funds/">финансовой отчётности</a>.</p>
-
   </body>
 
   <timestamp>$Date$ $Author$</timestamp>
-<translator>Олег Писменов</translator>
+  <translator>Олег Писменов</translator>
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