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-    <h2 id="options">What we can lobby for</h2>
+    <h2 id="options">What we can work for</h2>
 
     <ul>
 
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       </li>
 
       <li>
-	We can lobby the European Parliament and the Council of
+	We can ask the European Parliament and the Council of
 	Ministers to limit criminal sanctions to cases where the
 	infringement was done to fund organised crime or caused a
 	health or safety risk to the public.  Organised crime and
@@ -204,19 +204,19 @@
       </li>
 
       <li>
-	We can lobby the European Parliament and the Council of
+	We can ask the European Parliament and the Council of
 	Ministers to remove the criminalisation of &quot;attempting,
 	aiding or abetting and inciting [intellectual property right]
 	infringements&quot;
       </li>
 
       <li>
-	We can lobby the European Parliament to simply reject this
+	We can build pressure in the European Parliament to simply reject this
 	Directive.
       </li>
 
       <li>
-	We can lobby our national governments to remove Article 4 and
+	We can work with our national governments to remove Article 4 and
 	Article 6 from the Council Framework Decision.  It might be
 	sufficient to amend these Articles to limit them to cases
 	where organised crime is being funded or there is a health or
@@ -237,15 +237,16 @@
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-    <h2 id="todo">Todo</h2>
+    <h2 id="todo">What needs to be done immediately</h2>
 
     <p>
       Many Member States already have criminal sanctions for copyright
       and trademark infringement, and some even have criminal
       sanctions for patent infringement.  When politicians ask
       &quot;What harm have criminal sanctions caused in other
-      countries?&quot; we need to have a list of good examples.  This
-      list has to be gathered.
+      countries?&quot; we need to have a list of good examples.</p>
+
+    <p>This list has to be gathered, and for that we will need your help.
     </p>