I get it now! For me it is but I can agree it might be confusing. What about? "If you want to make any changes in your yearly payment, switch to monthly payment, or end your financial support,…
(11) Let's change it to your proposal (12) yes please. After the "Dear xxx," in English the first letter of the next word should be uppercase.
I wasn't aware of that. I was trying to clarify the name for the new ones but if the name is only LWN, of course we cannot use the other one.
personally, I found it reiterative. if you are a supporter, you are contributing. maybe "The best way to support us financially is by following the"
"pay" for me sounds even worst that "donate". Indeed, for me pay is that, just someone who is just giving away money without really believe in it.
maybe we can put "make" a bank transfer? So we…
Right. Let's change it better to thank you for offering a donation to the FSFE! We greatly appreciate your support and your trust in us.
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Merge pull request 'Proofreading YH4F second round announcement' (#2916) from anaghz-patch-1 into master