Merge pull request 'Implementing Richard’s corrections' (#3902) from schlauch-improvements into master

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@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 <p>The German Aerospace Center (DLR) has adopted the REUSE 
 specification in some of its projects. We have talked to Tobias 
 Schlauch, research software engineer at the DLR, about the role of Free 
-Software for research, innovation, and the importance of a clear 
+Software for research and innovation, and the importance of clear 
 understanding and displaying of the legal information of software 
 projects. He highlights the special contributions that REUSE has to 
 offer for software development but also for research.</p> 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ offer for software development but also for research.</p>
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 <p>The <a href="https://reuse.software/">REUSE</a> initiative, started 
-by the Free Software Foundation Europe (FSFE) makes licensing easy for 
+by the Free Software Foundation Europe (FSFE), makes licensing easy for 
 humans and machines alike. With REUSE, we solve a fundamental issue 
 that Free Software licensing has at the very source: what license is a 
 file licensed under, and who owns the copyright? A set of best 
@@ -45,13 +45,13 @@ Technology</em></em></a> at DLR since 2005. He currently serves as the
 representative of the <a href="https://rse.dlr.de/"><em><em>DLR 
 Software Engineering Initiative</em></em></a>. In this position, he 
 organises the DLR research software community and coordinates the 
-DLR-wide application of software engineering methods, processes and 
+DLR-wide application of software engineering methods, processes, and 
 tools.</p> 
 
 <p><strong>FSFE: Welcome Tobias, and thank you for taking 
-the time to let us know more about the work carried by DLR, especially 
+the time to let us know more about the work carried out by DLR, especially 
 when it comes to Free Software and a proper licensing and copyright 
-displaying of such projects. Let’s start from the beginning, why is 
+displaying of such projects. Let’s start from the beginning: why is 
 software a core activity of the research carried out by 
 DLR?</strong></p>
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ challenging with the rise of computational research and has led to the
 so-called <a 
 href="https://www.nature.com/articles/533452a"><em><em>reproducibility 
 crisis</em></em></a>. For example, still too often it is not clear 
-which concrete version of a software has been used to achieve a 
+which concrete software version has been used to achieve a 
 specific result or, even worse, the used data sets and software are not 
 available at all.</p> 
 
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ Engineering Guidelines</em></em></a> and make REUSE the default way on
 how to document license and copyright information. The effect in the 
 wider research community will take some time but I think that we can 
 reach a point where we finally have a clearer picture of the license 
-situation when reusing a software.</p> 
+situation when reusing software.</p> 
 
 <p><strong>FSFE: If you could 
 improve/change something to bring the Free Software ecosystem and the 
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ continuing improving the tool and documentation but also for keeping up
 an ongoing and fruitful discussion regarding its specification. </p> 
 <p>The contribution of all our supporters also allows our continuing 
 work on REUSE as well as on all our activities. You can join them by 
-becoming a supporter, tell your friends how they can <a href="/donate/donate.html">support our work 
+becoming a supporter; tell your friends how they can <a href="/donate/donate.html">support our work 
 with a small donation</a>. Your support enables our work!</p> 
 
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