Merge pull request 'adding Richard changes' (#3607) from newsletter-202308 into master

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@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ waiting for the jury feedback on their projects.</p>
     <li><a href="#Cyber-Resilience-Act-and-Free-Software-Parliament-waters-down-its-own-position"><strong>Cyber Resilience Act &amp; Free Software: Parliament waters down its own position</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#EU-Parliament-intends-to-widen-participation-in-the-Interoperable-Europe-Board"><strong>EU Parliament intends to widen participation in the Interoperable Europe Board</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#YH4F-Coding-is-over"><strong>YH4F: Coding is over!</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon,-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon,-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon, and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Take-Action-Add-our-email-addresses-to-your-contacts"><strong>Take Action! Add our email addresses to your contacts</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Quote-of-the-month"><strong>Quote of the month</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Contribute-to-our-Newsletter"><strong>Contribute to our Newsletter</strong></a></li>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ of the project, and the quality of the code.</p>
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-<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
+<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
 <p>More and more people are turning away 
 from social media platforms like Facebook and YouTube to alternatives 
 like Mastodon and PeerTube. Why are they different? How are they 
@@ -106,9 +106,9 @@ networks through our talks and workshops! </p>
 
 <h3 id="Summer-Meeting-FrOScon-and-CCC-2023">Summer Meeting, FrOScon, and CCC 2023</h3>
  
-<p>In first weekend of July, FSFE volunteers and staffers met at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
+<p>On July 7-9 FSFE volunteers and staffers met at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
 evening until Sunday afternoon, we spent time together discussing our current activities, acquiring new knowledge about Free Software 
-topics, engaging in fruitful conversations, and of course, having a lot 
+topics, engaging in fruitful conversations, and of course having a lot 
 of fun together.</p> 
 
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