Improve letters to Zangemann page

Reviewed-on: #3890
Change title and improve first prargraph
2023-11-21 15:01:23 +00:00 · 2023-11-21 15:35:19 +01:00
1 changed files with 2 additions and 4 deletions
--- a/activities/ada-zangemann/letters.en.xhtml
+++ b/activities/ada-zangemann/letters.en.xhtml
@ -9,12 +9,10 @@
 <body class="article">
- <h1 class="p-name">Children letters to Zangeman</h1>
+ <h1 class="p-name">Letters to Zangeman</h1>
 <p>  
-  Here we collect some letters from young readers of <a href="/activities/ada-zangemann">Ada
+  Here are some of the letters addressed to Zangemann we receive.<br />Would you like to write him? Send us your letter and we will make sure he gets it!
  &amp; Zangemann - A Tale of Software, Skateboards, and Raspberry Ice Cream</a> that they send
  to FSFE.
 </p>
 <figure>
Author	SHA1	Message	Date
tommi	d5ce1a8db7	Improve letters to Zangemann page All checks were successful continuous-integration/drone/push Build is passing Details Reviewed-on: #3890	2023-11-21 15:01:23 +00:00
Tommi	b8158ab973	Change title and improve first prargraph All checks were successful continuous-integration/drone/pr Build is passing Details	2023-11-21 15:35:19 +01:00