Merge pull request 'adding newsletter proofread' (#3402 ) from newsletter20230502 into master

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adding newsletter proofread
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@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 <p> In this issue, you can read about the EU project NGI Zero, LLW, the 
 FOSS-North conference, and the struggle of Lithuanian students to avoid 
 using proprietary 2FA. Don't miss our new SFP episode on Device 
-Neutrality, deepen your knowledge with two interesting articles, enjoy 
+Neutrality; deepen your knowledge with two interesting articles; enjoy 
-the latests ‘Ada &amp; Zangemann’ readings, and discover two YH4F projects.
+the latest ‘Ada &amp; Zangemann’ readings; and discover two YH4F projects.
 </p>
 <figure>
@ -35,12 +35,12 @@ that preceded the conference.
 </p>
 <p>During FOSS-North, over 180 participants took the opportunity to 
-learn and discuss about Free Software in more than 20 sessions. FSFE's 
+learn about and discuss Free Software in more than 20 sessions. FSFE's 
 Policy Project Manager Lina Ceballos gave a keynote speech about the 
 Interoperable Europe Act and its possible impact on the Free Software 
 community. </p>
 <p>📺 The recordings of the sessions will be available on 
-<a href="ttps://media.fsfe.org ">the FSFE Peertube channel</a> soon, so stay tuned!"
+<a href="ttps://media.fsfe.org ">the FSFE Peertube channel</a> soon, so stay tuned!
 </p>
 <figure>
@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ reading proposals: REUSE specs for the scientific community &amp; Free
 Software to control technology</h3> 
 <p>Last year, the FSFE presented the REUSE initiative at the Weizenbaum 
-Conference 2022 „Practicing Sovereignty – Interventions for Open 
+Conference 2022 “Practicing Sovereignty – Interventions for Open 
 Digital Futures”. The presentation resulted in an <a 
 href="https://www.weizenbaum-institut.de/media/Publikationen/Weizenbaum_Proceedings/Proceedings_Weizenbaum_Conference_2022.pdf">academic 
 article</a> (EN, page 66-71) explaining how REUSE specifications 
@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ governments, and businesses.</p>
 <p>Check out also our article on <a href="https://www.ifa.de/fileadmin/Content/docs/foerderungen/CCP_Programm/CCP_DigitalCivilSociety_Access-OpenTech.pdf">Free Software to control 
 technology</a> in the Publication "Access OpenTech" for the CrossCulture 
-Programme (CCP) by ifa (EN, pages 11-12) 
+Programme (CCP) by ifa (EN, pages 18-21) 
 </p>
@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ Zangemann in English or German. While you can simply order the German
 edition <a 
 href="https://oreilly.de/produkt/ada-und-zangemann/?ref=10022">online 
 or at your favourite book store</a>, the English version is currently 
-available in US from the publisher and at the FSF online store and can 
+available in the US from the publisher and at the FSF online store and can 
 be pre-ordered in the rest of the world. One more reason to pre-order 
 it? It helps to support a book under a Creative Commons Share-alike 
 license. </p> 
@ -137,8 +137,8 @@ license. </p>
 <p>If you would also like to listen to it, we are giving 
-you two options: the reading of the book at the <a href="https://www-tracey.archive.org/details/LI_S01E82_Ada_and_Zangemann_a_childrens_book_about_FLOSS__3D61">last episode of the 
+you two options: the reading of the book at the <a href="https://www-tracey.archive.org/details/LI_S01E82_Ada_and_Zangemann_a_childrens_book_about_FLOSS__3D61">last episode 
-episode of the Linux Inlaws podcast</a> and the video of the <a 
+of the Linux Inlaws podcast</a> and the video of the <a 
 href="https://media.libreplanet.org/u/libreplanet/m/book-reading-ada-zangemann-a-tale-of-software-skateboards-and-raspberry-ice-cream/">reading 
 at LibrePlanet</a>, the annual conference of the FSF, our sister 
 organisation. </p>
@ -160,19 +160,19 @@ about the projects</a>
 <h3 id="Do-not-forget-to-check-our-Events-page">Don’t forget to check our Events page</h3>
-<p>Our team and our community participates in many Free Software 
+<p>Our team and our community participate in many Free Software 
 events. <a href="/events/events.html">Check our events page</a> to be 
 up to date about what is going on. Subscribe to our feeds to stay 
-current about events and do not forget to sing up for our local group 
+current about events and do not forget to sign up for our local group 
 and country mailings to receive updates about what is going on in your 
 region. 
 </p>
 <h3 id="Get-Involved!-Contact-your-administrations">Get 
-Involved!Contact your administrations</h3>
+Involved! Contact your administrations</h3>
-<p> Code paid by the people should be available to the people! Publicly financed software developed 
+<p> Code paid for by the people should be available to the people! Publicly financed software developed 
 for the public sector should be available under a Free- and Open Source 
 Software license. Therefore, we created the activity <a 
 href="https://wiki.fsfe.org/Activities/ContactingAdministrationsForPMPC">Contact
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