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 <p>Our August issue comes with the latest updates of the CRA and the 
 IAE, a new episode of our Software Freedom podcast exploring Software 
-Freedom in EU policy and the announcement of our symposium about 
-decentralised social networks. YH4F participants – and we too- are 
-waiting for the jury feedback on their projects and we still remember 
-the great time we had at the Summer Meeting.</p> 
+Freedom in EU policy, and the announcement of our symposium about 
+decentralised social networks. YH4F participants -and we too- are 
+waiting for the jury feedback on their projects.</p> 
 
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@@ -34,8 +33,8 @@ the great time we had at the Summer Meeting.</p>
     <li><a href="#Cyber-Resilience-Act-and-Free-Software-Parliament-waters-down-its-own-position"><strong>Cyber Resilience Act &amp; Free Software: Parliament waters down its own position</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#EU-Parliament-intends-to-widen-participation-in-the-Interoperable-Europe-Board"><strong>EU Parliament intends to widen participation in the Interoperable Europe Board</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#YH4F-Coding-is-over"><strong>YH4F: Coding is over!</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon,-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Take-Action-Add-our-email-addresses-to-your-contacts"><strong>Take Action! Add our email addresses to your contacts</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Quote-of-the-month"><strong>Quote of the month</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Contribute-to-our-Newsletter"><strong>Contribute to our Newsletter</strong></a></li>
@@ -67,7 +66,7 @@ market, while protecting developers and non-profit work.</p>
 <h3 id="EU-Parliament-intends-to-widen-participation-in-the-Interoperable-Europe-Board">EU Parliament intends to widen participation in the Interoperable Europe Board</h3> 
 
 <p>In July the EU Parliament’s Committee responsible for the 
-Interoperable Europe Act has adopted its final position. It is a step 
+Interoperable Europe Act adopted its final position. It is a step 
 forward towards a more inclusive Interoperable Europe Board while it 
 introduces clearer indicators and statistics to monitor the progress of 
 the Act. This position must now be upheld during the upcoming trilogue. 
@@ -83,10 +82,10 @@ this</a></p>
 <h3 id="YH4F-Coding-is-over">YH4F: Coding is over!</h3> 
 
 <p>The second edition of Youth Hacking 4 Freedom, the hacking 
-competition for young Europeans has just ended. For the last six 
+competition for young Europeans, has just ended. For the last six 
 months, the participants have worked on developing their own personal 
 Free Software projects. It is now the turn of the YH4F jury to evaluate 
-the participants’ submitted projects, s taking into consideration 
+the participants’ submitted projects, taking into consideration 
 different criteria such as the originality of the idea, the creativity 
 of the project, and the quality of the code.</p>
 
@@ -94,7 +93,7 @@ of the project, and the quality of the code.</p>
 </p>
 
  
-<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
+<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
 <p>More and more people are turning away 
 from social media platforms like Facebook and YouTube to alternatives 
 like Mastodon and PeerTube. Why are they different? How are they 
@@ -105,13 +104,11 @@ networks through our talks and workshops! </p>
 </p>
 
 
-<h3 id="Summer-Meeting-FrOScon-and-CCC-2023">Summer Meeting, FrOScon and CCC 2023</h3>
+<h3 id="Summer-Meeting-FrOScon-and-CCC-2023">Summer Meeting, FrOScon, and CCC 2023</h3>
  
-<p>The first weekend of July, FSFE volunteers and staffers met for to 
-spending a weekend together at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
-evening until Sunday afternoon, we spent time together discussing about 
-our current activities, acquiring new knowledge about Free Software 
-topics, engaging in fruitful conversations and of course, having a lot 
+<p>In first weekend of July, FSFE volunteers and staffers met at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
+evening until Sunday afternoon, we spent time together discussing our current activities, acquiring new knowledge about Free Software 
+topics, engaging in fruitful conversations, and of course, having a lot 
 of fun together.</p> 
 
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@@ -120,13 +117,12 @@ of fun together.</p>
        </figure>
 
 
-<p>At the beginning of this month, we will be in FrOScon with a talk, an 
-Ada book reading and a booth. Join is if you are in the area!</p> 
+<p>At the beginning of this month, we will be in FrOScon with a talk, a reading of 'Anda &amp; Zangemann', and a booth. Join is if you are in the area!</p> 
 <p>After that, we will be camping in the Chaos Communication Camp 2023!. We 
 cannot wait to meet you, once again in person, at the 'Bits &amp; Bäume' 
 village from 15th to 19th August 2023.</p> 
 
-<p>And of course, <a href="/events/events.html">check out our website</a> to be up to date of all our events!
+<p>And of course, <a href="/events/events.html">check out our website</a> to be up to date with all our events!
 </p> 
 
 
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 <h3 id="Quote-of-the-Month">Quote of the Month</h3> 
 <blockquote>
-<p>
-   "Introduce readers young and old to the power and peril of software. 
-   Behind it all is a backdrop of ethics of  </p>
-  <cite>
-  knowledge sharing upon 
-   which the arc of human history rides." - Vint Cerf, Computer 
-   Scientist and One of the Inventors of the Internet talking about the 
-   book “Ada &amp; Zangemann”</cite>
+  <p><cite>"Introduce readers young and old to the power and peril of software. 
+   Behind it all is a backdrop of ethics of knowledge sharing upon 
+   which the arc of human history rides." </cite>- Vint Cerf, cmputer 
+   scientist and one of the inventors of the Internet, talking about the 
+   book “Ada &amp; Zangemann”</p>
 </blockquote>