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     <li><a href="#Cyber-Resilience-Act-and-Free-Software-Parliament-waters-down-its-own-position"><strong>Cyber Resilience Act &amp; Free Software: Parliament waters down its own position</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#EU-Parliament-intends-to-widen-participation-in-the-Interoperable-Europe-Board"><strong>EU Parliament intends to widen participation in the Interoperable Europe Board</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#YH4F-Coding-is-over"><strong>YH4F: Coding is over!</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet"><strong>"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon,-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon, and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Summer-Meeting-FrOScon,-and-CCC-2023"><strong>Summer Meeting, FrOScon and CCC 2023</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Take-Action-Add-our-email-addresses-to-your-contacts"><strong>Take Action! Add our email addresses to your contacts</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Quote-of-the-month"><strong>Quote of the month</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Contribute-to-our-Newsletter"><strong>Contribute to our Newsletter</strong></a></li>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ of the project, and the quality of the code.</p>
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-<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
+<h3 id="The-world-after-Facebook-Twitter,-and-YouTube-A-new-generation-of-the-Internet">"The world after Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. A new generation of the Internet?"</h3> 
 <p>More and more people are turning away 
 from social media platforms like Facebook and YouTube to alternatives 
 like Mastodon and PeerTube. Why are they different? How are they 
@@ -106,9 +106,9 @@ networks through our talks and workshops! </p>
 
 <h3 id="Summer-Meeting-FrOScon-and-CCC-2023">Summer Meeting, FrOScon, and CCC 2023</h3>
  
-<p>On July 7-9 FSFE volunteers and staffers met at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
+<p>In first weekend of July, FSFE volunteers and staffers met at Linux Hotel, in Essen. From Friday 
 evening until Sunday afternoon, we spent time together discussing our current activities, acquiring new knowledge about Free Software 
-topics, engaging in fruitful conversations, and of course having a lot 
+topics, engaging in fruitful conversations, and of course, having a lot 
 of fun together.</p> 
 
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