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@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Software related topics. Once again, we are participating in this
 two-day event at the Free University of Brussels with our booth, the 
 Legal and Policy Devroom that we co-organize, and other interesting 
 talks. Our team will be there ready to meet you, engage in fruitful 
-discussions, and network with the Free Software community. Come along to 
+discussions and network with the Free Software Community. Come along to 
 check out our  socks and t-shirts, along with a bunch of freshly-printed 
 stickers!
 </p>
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@ stickers!
 <p>
 If you are planning to come to FOSDEM, we encourage you to join our <a 
 href="https://matrix.to/#/%23fosdem24:fsfe.org">Matrix FOSDEM 2024 
-room</a>. Stay up to date and step by our social gatherings!<br/>Indeed, 
+room</a>. Stay up to date and step by at our social gatherings!<br/>Indeed, 
 if you are already in Brussels on Friday, you can join our first social 
-gathering and catch up! We'll meet for dinner and drinks at La 
+gathering and catch up! Meeting point for dinner and drinks at La 
 Mazette at 19:00h. <a 
 href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/1196935388">See in OpenStreetMap</a>.
 </p>
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/1196935388">See in OpenStreetMap</a>.
 <h3>Saturday, 3 February</h3> 
 <p>
 From Saturday, as usual, you will find us around, mainly at our booth. 
-Whether you are a newcomer or a Free Software expert, our team will be happy 
+If you are a newcomer or a Free Software expert, our team will be happy 
-to meet you at the FSFE booth. Come to chat with us and discuss of 
+to meet you at the FSFE booth. Come to chat with us and discuss about 
 Free Software, get informed about our activities, share with us your 
 impressions about our new stickers, and add a new t shirt - or a pair of 
 socks - to your wardrobe. Our booth is the best place to find our team! 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ advocacy, 5</strong>.</p>
 <p>Moreover, Saturday is the day during which our co-organized devroom, <a 
 href="https://fosdem.org/2024/schedule/track/legal/">the Legal and 
 Policy Issues Devroom</a>, takes place. We have been co-organizing this 
-devroom since 2020. Since then, FOSDEM participants have showed great 
+devroom since 2020 and since then, FOSDEM participants have showed great 
 interest in these topics. Our Legal and Policy Issues Devroom is taking 
 place from 15:00 in Guillissen. One more year, together with our 
 co-organisers Karen Sandler and Bradley Kuhn from Software Freedom 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Devroom Room</a>: UA2.220 (Guillissen)
 	<ul>
 		<li>
 		<strong>15:00h – 15:05h</strong> -  Welcome to the Legal and Policy 
-		Issues Devroom: UA2.220 (Guillissen)
+		Issues Devroom Room: UA2.220 (Guillissen)
 		</li>
 		<li>
 		<strong>15:05h – 16:00h</strong> -  RHEL and CentOS and the growth of 
@@ -101,15 +101,16 @@ Devroom Room</a>: UA2.220 (Guillissen)
 	
 <p>
 After a long day, what is better than a pizza? Join us to continue 
-discussing Free Software while we enjoy yummy pizza. We'll at Otomat at 19:30h. <a 
+discussing about Free Software while we enjoy a yummy pizza. Meeting 
+point at Otomat at 19:30h. <a 
 href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/4665832791#map=19/50.85015/4.34708">See 
 in OpenStreetMap</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Sunday, 4 February</h3> 
 <p>On Sunday, our booth will be open from 9:00h until 17:00h. You will find 
-there our team and volunteers who would love to explain our 
+there our team and volunteers who would love to explain you our 
-activities to you. We come with a lot of merchande, but if you 
+activities. We are also coming with a lot of merchandising, but if you 
 want to secure a t-shirt in your size, the sooner you are coming, the 
 better!
 </p>
@@ -119,12 +120,12 @@ On this day, the <a
 href="https://fosdem.org/2024/schedule/track/eu-policy/">"Open Source in 
 the European Legislative Landscape" devroom</a> will take place. This 
 devroom is run by Simon Phipps, Enzo Ribagnac, Maarten Aertsen, Axel 
-Thévernet, Deb Bryant, Alexander Sander, and Gijs Hillenius. The 
+Thévernet, Deb Bryant, Alexander Sander, and Gijs Hillenius, and the 
 Community will discuss current policy topics with European legislators. 
 There, Alexander Sander, FSFE's Senior Policy Consultant, will moderate 
 the session on <a 
 href="https://fosdem.org/2024/schedule/event/fosdem-2024-3717-foss-policy-engagement-panel/">"FOSS Policy 
-Engagement"</a>. After that, if you stay in the same room, you will have 
+Engagement"</a>. After it, if you stay in that same room, you will have 
 the chance to listen to Lina Ceballos, FSFE Policy Project Manager, who 
 will open the session on <a 
 href="https://fosdem.org/2024/schedule/event/fosdem-2024-3710-public-services-interoperability-the-interoperable-europe-act-the-challenges-and-opportunities-for-the-free-and-open-source-communities-/">“Public 
@@ -165,21 +166,21 @@ of Non-Free Software Licenses in AI ecosystems Room UB2.252A (Lameere)
 
 <p>
 Of course, there will be many more interesting talks going on! You can 
-check the schedule of the two-day conference in the <a 
+check the schedule of the two day conference in the <a 
 href="https://fosdem.org/2024/schedule/">FOSDEM website</a>.
 </p>
-<p>Let’s close these two intense but insightful days with our last community 
+<p>Let’s close this two intense but insightful days with our last community 
-gathering. We'll meet at 18:00 at the Cafè La Maison du Peuple. <a 
+gathering. Meeting point at 18:00 at the Cafè La Maison du Peuple. <a 
-href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/3349536694">See in Open Street Map</a>.
+href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/3349536694">See in OpenStreetMap</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Give us a hand!</h3>
 
 <p>
-Although we hope we do not have a lot of merchandise left at the end 
+Although we hope we do not have a lot of merchandising left at the end 
 of the conference, tearing down the booth is usually not an easy task so 
-we might need extra hands on Sunday. Contact our Office Assistant, 
+we might need extra hands on Sunday. Contact our Office Assistant 
-Francesca, at <email>fi@fsfe.org</email> if you can join us!
+Francesca <email>fi@fsfe.org</email> if you can join us!
 </p>
 
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