Merge pull request 'adding newsletter proofread by Richard' (#3710) from newsletter09 into master

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@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@
 <h1>"Back to school" for EU and German policy+++Ada available worldwide</h1>
 
 <p>
-September brings the resumption of EU politics and the mid-term of the 
+September brings the resumption of EU politics and the middle of the term of the 
 current German government, and we look at them from a Free Software 
-perspective. ‘Ada &amp; Zangemann' can now be ordered internationally, 
+perspective. 'Ada &amp; Zangemann' can now be ordered internationally, 
 and you can help us translate our 'What is Free Software' video into 
 more EU languages. And remember - rooting your device does not void its 
 warranty.
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ warranty.
   <p>Table of contents</p>
   <ol>
     <li><a href="#Halftime-for-the-German-government-Thank-you-for-the-fine-words-now-let-the-deeds-speak"><strong>Halftime for the German government: Thank you for the fine words, now let the deeds speak!</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Liability-Interoperability-&amp;-Free-Software-in-EU-what-we-are-expecting"><strong>Liability, Interoperability &amp; Free Software in EU: what we are expecting</strong>strong&gt;</a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Ada-&amp;-Zangemann-available now in English worldwide"><strong>‘Ada &amp; Zangemann’ - available now in English worldwide</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Liability-Interoperability-&amp;-Free-Software-in-EU-what-we-are-expecting"><strong>Liability, Interoperability, &amp; Free Software in EU: what we are expecting</strong>strong&gt;</a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Ada-&amp;-Zangemann-available now in English worldwide"><strong>‘Ada &amp; Zangemann’: available now in English worldwide</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Unleash-the-potential-of-your-phone-Rooting-your-device-does-not-void-its-warranty"><strong>Unleash the potential of your phone: Rooting your device does not void its warranty</strong></a></li>
-    <li><a href="#Take-Action-Contribute-to-translate-our-What-is-Free-Software-video"><strong>"Take Action! Contribute to translate our ‘What is Free Software’ video"</strong></a></li>
+    <li><a href="#Take-Action-Contribute-to-translate-our-What-is-Free-Software-video"><strong>Take Action! Contribute to translate our ‘What is Free Software’ video</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Chaos-Communication-Camp-2023-back-to-the-grounds"><strong>Chaos Communication Camp 2023: back to the grounds!</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#foss-north-videos-and-more-conferences-on-the-way"><strong>foss-north videos and more conferences on the way!</strong></a></li>
-	<li><a href="#Join-us-as-an-intern-and-make-the-difference"><strong>Join us as an intern and make the difference!</strong></a></li>
+	<li><a href="#Join-us-as-an-intern-and-make-the-difference"><strong>Join us as an intern and make a difference!</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Quote-of-the-month"><strong>Quote of the month</strong></a></li>
     <li><a href="#Contribute-to-our-Newsletter"><strong>Contribute to our Newsletter</strong></a></li>
     </ol>
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ German government to <a href="/news/2023/news-20230829-01.html">implement a sust
 and to provide the necessary funds in the federal budget now.</p>
 
          
-<h3 id="Liability-Interoperability-&amp;-Free-Software-in-EU-what-we-are-expecting">Liability, Interoperability &amp; Free Software in EU: what we are expecting</h3>
+<h3 id="Liability-Interoperability-&amp;-Free-Software-in-EU-what-we-are-expecting">Liability, Interoperability, &amp; Free Software in EU: what we are expecting</h3>
  
 <p>After the summer recess, EU institutions are resuming their 
 activities at the end of August. In the coming months, we expect to see 
@@ -63,11 +63,11 @@ mean
 for Free Software and its community?</a>.</p>
 
 <h3 id="#Ada-&amp;-Zangemann-available-now-in-English-worldwide">‘Ada 
-&amp; Zangemann’ – available now in English worldwide</h3> 
+&amp; Zangemann’: available now in English worldwide</h3> 
 <p>From 29 August the English version of the book <a 
 href="/activities/ada-zangemann/index.html">"Ada &amp; Zangemann - A 
 Tale of 
-Software, Skateboards, and Raspberry Ice Cream"</a> is  <a 
+Software, Skateboards, and Raspberry Ice Cream"</a> has been  <a 
 href="/news/2023/news-20230831-01.html">available 
 internationally</a>. The book tells the story of the famous inventor 
 Zangemann and the girl Ada, a curious tinkerer. Ada begins to 
@@ -96,15 +96,15 @@ Software"</a> into more European languages! This
 video explains in less than 3 minutes why Free Software is important, 
 and each translation costs about 250 Euros. Therefore, all 
 contributions until the end of September will be used to help our 
-community in Europe to get the video in their native language. Help us 
+community in Europe to get the video in their native languages. Help us 
 spreading this message or <a href="/donate/donate.html">making a small contribution</a> to support this 
 campaign!</p>
 
  
-<h3 id="Chaos-Communication-Camp-2023-back-to-the-grounds">"Chaos 
-Communication Camp 2023: back to the grounds!"</h3> 
-<p>One of our most favourite events was back this summer: Chaos Communication Camp 2023! 
-This event brings together technologists, activists, and enthusiasts to 
+<h3 id="Chaos-Communication-Camp-2023-back-to-the-grounds">Chaos 
+Communication Camp 2023: back to the grounds!</h3> 
+<p>One of our favourite events was back this summer: Chaos Communication Camp 2023! 
+This event brought together technologists, activists, and enthusiasts to 
 discuss, share, and celebrate technology, privacy, and freedom in 
 Brandenburg, Germany. This year, the Free Software Foundation Europe 
 joined the campers as part of the 'Bits und Bäume' village.</p>
@@ -114,33 +114,33 @@ from the event and see what else we did.</p>
 <h3 id="foss-north-videos-and-more-conferences-on-the-way!">foss-north videos and more conferences on the way!</h3>
  
 <p>🇸🇪 Last April we attended foss-north (link!!), where FSFE co-organised 
-a track on political, social and legal issues around Free Software,. 
+a track on political, social, and legal issues around Free Software. 
 Among other great speakers, there was a keynote by Lina Ceballos, on 
 the Interoperable Europe Act. It took some time, but finally we have 
 the videos of this event! <a 
 href="https://conf.tube/w/p/dSNeqFG9b73YmxkfdVozsZ">Watch all the 
 interesting talks</a> from the 
 comfort of your own home! And we hope to see you there next year (as a 
-speaker or as a participant 😉)</p>
+speaker or as a participant 😉).</p>
 
 <p>🇷🇸 You can also join us in our next events! We will be participating in the Balkan Computer 
 Congress - BalCCon2k23 in Novi Sad, Serbia, talking about Device 
-Neutrality and NGI (8-10 September). <br/><br/>🇵🇹 The NGI innitiative will be also 
-explained in Festa do Software Livre" in Aveiro, Portugal, where we 
+Neutrality and NGI (8-10 September). <br/><br/>🇵🇹 The NGI initiative will also be 
+explained in "Festa do Software Livre" in Aveiro, Portugal, where we 
 will also talk about Router Freedom (16-17 September) and also there 
-but a few days later (30 Sept) we will discuss Device neutrality at the 
+but a few days later (30 September) we will discuss Device Neutrality at the 
 "Encontro Nacional de Estudantes de Informatica”.</p> 
 
 <p>🇮🇹 On September 16, we will be celebrating Software Freedom Day in Nembro (Italy) with the 
 first reading in Italian of the book ‘Ada &amp; Zangemann’, and in Cologne 
 (Germany) we will discuss  the role of decentralised social media 
-platforms in our society (22 Sept).</p> 
-<p>🇩🇪 In Germany, we will be at PITS 2023- Public-IT-Security (21 Sept), in Berlin and then at Bitkom ( Sept 
+platforms in our society (22 September).</p> 
+<p>🇩🇪 In Germany, we will be at PITS 2023 - Public-IT-Security (21 September), in Berlin and then at Bitkom ( September 
 27) with a talk about the Cyber Resilience Act.</p> 
 
-<p><strong>🇨🇭 And if you are around, celebrate with us the 40th Anniversary of GNU! On September 27, at the 
-Volkshaus in Biel/Bienne (Switzerland)  join the GNU community to 
-celebrate this occasion, and help build a future where users' computing 
+<p><strong>🇨🇭 And if you are around, celebrate with us the 40th Anniversary of GNU! On 27 September, at the 
+Volkshaus in Biel/Bienne (Switzerland), join the GNU community to 
+celebrate this occasion and help build a future where users' computing 
 freedom extends further than ever.</strong></p> 
 
 <p>
@@ -149,16 +149,16 @@ events in <a href="/events/events.html">fsfe.org/events</a>.
 </p>
 
 <figure>
-     <img src="https://pics.fsfe.org/uploads/medium/f1/35/630abac3c6cb3e2d1fe8533395eb.png"
+     <img src="https://pics.fsfe.org/uploads/original/e8/67/1a5aa8f7f6dc501414e9af76b1f0.png"
        alt="Image of the GNU 40 Anniversary"/>
        </figure>
 
 
-<h3 id="Join-us-as-an-intern-and-make-the-difference">Join us as an intern and make the difference!</h3> 
+<h3 id="Join-us-as-an-intern-and-make-the-difference">Join us as an intern and make a difference!</h3> 
  <p>Have you heard about Free Software and you want to know more 
   about it? Are you already a Free Software advocate and do you want to 
   help to bring software freedom to our society? Then <a href="/news/2023/news-20230815-01.html">our paid 
-  internships are for you!</a>. Learn by doing and gain knowledge an0 
+  internships are for you!</a>. Learn by doing and gain knowledge and 
   technical skills through an internship with us.</p>
 
 <h3 id="Quote-of-the-Month">Quote of the Month</h3> 
@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ events in <a href="/events/events.html">fsfe.org/events</a>.
   or 4 times already, and says this book explains my work on software 
   freedom finally in a way that's easily understandable".</cite> Karen 
   Sandler, Executive Director of the Software Freedom Conservancy, 
-  talking about the book Ada &amp; Zangemann:a tale of software, 
-  skateboards, and raspberry ice cream.</p>
+  talking about the book "Ada &amp; Zangemann - A Tale of Software, 
+  Skateboards, and Raspberry Ice Cream". </p>
 </blockquote>