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 active Fellow Elias Diem passed away. He was on his way back home from a hiking
 trip with a friend in the Swiss alps. He slipped and fell about 150 meters. His
 friend tried to rescue him, but it was too late. He died of a heavy head injury
-in the age of 39.</p>
+at the age of 39.</p>
 
 <p>Elias was one of our most active Fellows in Switzerland and his death
-is a great loss to us all. He led the Zurich Fellowship Group and 
+is a great loss to all of us. He led the Zurich Fellowship Group and 
 organised or participated in several Free Software related events. He loved the text editor
 Vim and the mail user agent Mutt. Elias was very interested in Free Hardware as
 well and contributed to the <a href="https://www.labdoo.org/">Ladboo
 project</a>, which helps to bring GNU/Linux laptops to schools in emerging
 countries.</p>
 
-<p>There is no way to fill the gap his loss caused in our hearts. We can
+<p>There is no way to fill the gap his loss causes in our hearts. We can
 just try to continue his dedicated work for freedom and fairness.</p>
 
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