From b6e687848bcad6337ac6f1da6f836ca71545f577 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "max.mehl" <max.mehl@fsfe.org>
Date: Mon, 10 Feb 2014 15:26:19 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] polishing ilovefs pr

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@@ -9,38 +9,37 @@
 <div class="captioned left" style="max-width: 350px; width: 30%;">
 <img src="/campaigns/ilovefs/artwork/graphics/ilovefs-heart-px.png" alt="pixelated heart with the ilovefs hashtag" width="100%" />
 </div>
-<p newsteaser="yes">On 14th February many people show their love for their 
-significant other. The Free Software Foundation Europe asks all Free 
-Software users to also think about the dedicated hard-working people in the 
-Free Software community and to show them their appreciation <a href=
-"/news/2013/news-20130221-01.html">like last year</a>.</p>
+<p newsteaser="yes">On 14th February, the Free Software Foundation Europe 
+asks all Free Software users to think about the dedicated hard-working 
+people in the Free Software community and to show them their appreciation <a 
+href="/news/2013/news-20130221-01.html">like last year</a>.</p>
 
 <blockquote><p>"Every day, we use Free Software and often take it for 
 granted. We write bug reports, tell others how they should improve their 
 software, or ask them for new features - and often we are not shy about 
 criticising. So, to let the people in Free Software receive a positive 
 feedback at least once a year, there is the 'I love Free Software day'." 
-says Matthias Kirschner, who initiated the FSFE's <a href=
-"http://ilovefs.org">#ilovefs campaign</a> in 2009.</p> </blockquote>
+says FSFE's vice president Matthias Kirschner, who initiated the <a href=
+"http://ilovefs.org">#ilovefs campaign</a> in 2010.</p></blockquote>
 
 <p>For the <a href="http://ilovefs.org">"I love Free Software Day" </a> the 
 FSFE has several suggestions how to show your love creatively to the people 
 behind Free Software, including:</p>
 
 <ul>
-  <li>write an e-mail or letter to contributors expressing how much you like 
-  what they are doing</li>
+  <li>Write an e-mail or letter to contributors expressing how much you like 
+  what they are doing.</li>
 
-  <li>share your feelings about Free Software in social networks and 
+  <li>Share your feelings about Free Software in social networks and 
   microblogs using <a href="https://twitter.com/search?q=%23ilovefs">#ilovefs
   </a>. Or write a blog post about your favourite Free Software application.
   </li>
 
-  <li>buy your favourite contributor a drink. Or buy someone else a drink 
+  <li>Buy your favourite contributor a drink. Or buy someone else a drink 
   and while enjoying it, tell her/him about your favourite Free Software 
-  application</li>
+  program.</li>
 
-  <li>give a contributor a hug (ask for permission first). You might wonder 
+  <li>Give a contributor a hug (ask for permission first). You might wonder 
   how many Free Software developers live in your area!</li>
 
   <li>Help us collecting quotes for our <a href= 
@@ -48,14 +47,14 @@ behind Free Software, including:</p>
   Free Software</a>. Ask developers, artists, politicians, or other users to 
   send their quote to fellowship@fsfeurope.org.</li>
 
-  <li>take a picture of yourself showing your feelings for Free Software, 
+  <li>Take a picture of yourself showing your feelings for Free Software, 
   and post them online.</li>
 
-  <li><a href="/donate/donate.html">Donate to FSFE</a> or <a href= 
-  "https://wiki.fsfe.org/DonateToFreeSoftwareProjects">another Free Software 
-  initiative</a> to express your gratitude. They depend on your contribution 
-  to continue their work. So check out your favourite organisation and make 
-  a donation. You can be sure they will love you back.</li>
+  <li>Donate to <a href="https://wiki.fsfe.org/DonateToFreeSoftwareProjects">
+  Free Software initiatives</a> or <a href= "/donate/donate.html">to FSFE</a>
+  to express your gratitude. They depend on your contribution to continue 
+  their work. So check out your favourite organisation and make a donation. 
+  You can be sure they will love you back.</li>
 
   <li>Finally you can help spread the love by sharing the <a href= 
   "/campaigns/ilovefs/artwork/artwork.html">campaign banners</a>, by e-mail, 
@@ -63,10 +62,13 @@ behind Free Software, including:</p>
   hashtag #ilovefs for this).</li>
 </ul>
 
-<blockquote><p>"We are looking forward to see many messages of appreciation and 
-gratitude for the people behind the Software we use every day", says XXX 
-YYY. ", because they ease our everyday work by the tools they are providing 
-for us. We should be thankful for that".</p></blockquote>
+<blockquote><p>"We are looking forward to see many messages of appreciation 
+and gratitude for the people behind the software we use every day", says 
+Matthias Kirschner. "Free Software gains its strenghts by the community and 
+the ability to work together and join forces. We should not underestimate 
+the power of a simple "thank you" for people who are easing our everyday 
+work by the tools they are providing for us. So say thank you on 14th 
+February!"</p></blockquote>
 
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