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@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ the third Saturday in September, with diverse events and meetings. Our <a
 They did extensive testing and <a
   href="/news/2012/news-20120920-01.html">published the results</a>.</p>
 
-<p>Dressed with hoodies with the slogan "Independent through free software" our
+<p>Dressed with hoodies with the slogan "Independent through Free Software" our
 <a href="http://wiki.fsfe.org/groups/Vienna">Vienna Fellowship group</a> had an
 information booth giving away <a
   href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/franz.gratzer/2012/09/17/software-freedom-day-2012-in-vienna/">
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ Freedom Kosova 2012, Erik Albers <a
   gave a talk</a> and the day before he helped to free some Android phones.
 More devices were <a
   href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/anaghz/2012/09/17/libre-android-libre-knowledge/">liberated
-  during the Free Your Android workshop</a> that Torsten Grote organised during
-SFD in Berlin. And meanwhile in Cologne there was a <a
+  during the Free Your Android workshop</a>, that Torsten Grote organised during
+SFD in Berlin. And, in Cologne, there was a <a
   href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/stehmann/?p=572">gathering with lectures about
   software freedom</a>.</p>
 
@@ -45,17 +45,17 @@ because of a GNU GPL violation) about patents. </p>
   href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/gerloff/2012/09/17/ep-committee-postpones-discussion-of-unitary-patent/">the
   European Parliament has postponed the debate about the Unitary Patent</a> ,
 which gives us more time to work on pointing out the <a
-  href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/gerloff/2012/09/04/software-patents-in-europe-game-on/">several
+  href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/gerloff/2012/09/04/software-patents-in-europe-game-on/">
   serious problems and hazards of the proposal</a> to the Legal Affairs
 Commitee.</p>
 
 <p>Our president, Karsten Gerloff, wrote a series of articles about software
-patents, pointing at the current situation <a
+patents pointing at the current situation <a
 href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/gerloff/2012/09/05/how-the-european-patent-system-works/">at
-the European Union level</a>.Also, he <a
+the European Union level</a> and he <a
 href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/gerloff/2012/09/06/notes-from-boldrinlevine-2012-the-case-against-patents/">has
 published his notes</a> about "The Case Against Patents", a recent draft paper
-by economists Michele Boldrin and David K. Levine, and he concludes that
+by economists Michele Boldrin and David K. Levine. He concludes that
 we cannot "leave it to the EPO" and that "patent policy
 needs to be integrated into a larger innovation policy strategy"within the EU.</p>
 
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ the communities, or improve the culture of Free Software and Free licences.</p>
 
 <p>FSFE's new intern Léopold Baillard explains this in detail in <a
   href="http://blogs.fsfe.org/leobaillard/2012/09/26/french-prime-minister-recommands-free-software-in-public-administrations/">his
-  first blog post</a>, <a
+  first blog post</a>; <a
   href="https://joinup.ec.europa.eu/news/french-guideline-favours-use-free-and-open-source">EC's
-  joinup wrote about it</a>, and the French Free Software organisation APRIL
+  joinup wrote about it</a>; and the French Free Software organisation APRIL
 also has <a
   href="http://www.april.org/en/ayrault-circular-progress-use-free-software-french-administration-pending-legislative-part">good
   information on the case</a>.</p>
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@ also has <a
     battle about who will control the computers we will use tomorrow</a>, and
   why the general-purpose computer is worth fighting for.</li>
 
-  <li>There is information, that the City of Freiburg wants to switch to a
-  proprietary office suite. FSFE together with OSB Alliance and BIKT wrote <a
+  <li>There is information that the City of Freiburg wants to switch to a
+  proprietary office suite. FSFE, together with OSB Alliance and BIKT, wrote <a
     href="/news/2012/news-20120918-01.html">an open letter about it</a> asking
   several questions to the City's officials (German). EC's joinup <a
     href="http://joinup.ec.europa.eu/news/advocacy-groups-decry-freiburgs-stealth-return-proprietary-office">reported
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ also has <a
   <li>Thanks to Kåre Thor Olsen the article <a
     href="/freesoftware/society/democracy.html">"Democracy requires Free
     Software"</a> is now translated also into Danish. It is now available in 12
-  languages, thanks to all volunteers in our <a
+  languages, thanks to all the volunteers in our <a
     href="/contribute/translators/translators.html">our translators
     team</a>.</li>