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Why "upcycling"?

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You have an Android phone and its manufacturer does not offer you any recent updates of your phone or its operating system? You are faced with the dilemma of either buying a new phone or keep running an outdated device? Learn on this page how you can install and use a Free Software operating system on your phone that keeps your device up to date.

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You have an Android phone and its manufacturer does not offer you any recent updates of your phone or its operating system? You are faced with the dilemma of either buying a new phone or keeping running an outdated device? Learn on this page how you can install and use a Free Software operating system on your phone that keeps your device up to date.

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Installing a Free Software operating system means you often have more control how long to use your device. In addition, it comes with a lot of other benefits. Free Software gives you full control over your device, you can finally de-install apps you could not before and you profit from extended privacy protection - just to mention a few.

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Installing a Free Software operating system means you often have more control over how long to use your device. In addition, it comes with a lot of other benefits. Free Software gives you full control over your device, you can finally de-install apps you could not before, and you profit from extended privacy protection - just to mention a few.

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Please note: If you are new to the topic and this is the first time you are planning to install a new operating system on your device, be careful! Don't rush. Some steps are quite technical. Take your time to understand what you are doing. Do the necessary preparations and research for your particular device in advance. And remember that you are not alone! There is plenty of information and help available from diverse communities. Online and offline. These can be communities surrounding particular custom ROMs as well as general ones surrounding phone flashing. Many people also enjoy getting help by ask their local Free Software user group or repair café and get to know likeminded people. Also, we run workshops to help you with it.

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Please note: If you are new to the topic and this is the first time you are planning to install a new operating system on your device, be careful! Don't rush. Some steps are quite technical. Take your time to understand what you are doing. Do the necessary preparations and research for your particular device in advance. And remember that you are not alone! There is plenty of information and help available from diverse communities. Online and offline. These can be communities surrounding particular custom ROMs as well as general ones surrounding phone flashing. Many people also enjoy getting help by asking their local Free Software user group or repair café and getting to know likeminded people. Also, we run workshops to help you with it.

How does it work?

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To get back full control of your device and to extend its usage lifetime, you can install a Free Software operating system. Installing an operating system on an Android device is called "flashing". And a Free Software alternative systems based on the original Android operating system is called "custom ROM".

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To get back full control of your device and to extend its usage lifetime, you can install a Free Software operating system. Installing an operating system on an Android device is called "flashing". And a Free Software alternative system based on the original Android operating system is called a "custom ROM".

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Every time a new Android version is published there are multiple companies and communities who take the release code and re-publish it in a modified versions as custom ROMs. This is possible because large parts of the Android operating system - excluding third party apps, the G-Suite and some core libraries - are already Free Software. In practice, these custom ROMs usually ship a full Android-experience but without the dependencies on Google's or other company's proprietary software. And without other proprietary third-party apps that you might be used to see pre-installed when buying a new phone. Meaning they actually come more lightweight and slim.

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Every time a new Android version is published there are multiple companies and communities who take the release code and re-publish it in modified versions as custom ROMs. This is possible because large parts of the Android operating system - excluding third party apps, the G-Suite, and some core libraries - are already Free Software. In practice, these custom ROMs usually ship a full Android experience but without the dependencies on Google's or other companies' proprietary software. And without other proprietary third-party apps that you might be used to seeing pre-installed when buying a new phone. Meaning they actually come more lightweight and slim.

Choosing a custom ROM

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If you want to install a custom ROM on your phone, there are many ROMs to choose from. Some of them are closer to the original Android, others are more separated. Some include more Free Software components or pre-installed apps than others. Some have the focus on security, others on usability, others on modularity. The amount of custom ROMs to choose from can be compelling in the beginning. But in the end the choice gets limited by the phone model you have and the type of system you like to have, so it boils down to a overseeable number.

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If you want to install a custom ROM on your phone, there are many ROMs to choose from. Some of them are closer to the original Android, others are more distant. Some include more Free Software components or pre-installed apps than others. Some have the focus on security, others on usability, others on modularity. The number of custom ROMs to choose from can be disconcerting in the beginning. But in the end the choice gets limited by the phone model you have and the type of system you like to have, so it boils down to a manageable number.

Just to mention a few prominent examples that also span a range to choose from: CalyxOS has a focus on security and comes with verified boot. LineageOS has its focus to be executable on as many devices as possible and Replicant puts focus on freedom by offering 100% Free Software, including the drivers. Use one of those or find one that suits your purposes well.

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Some phones are easier to upcycle then others. This is because some manufacturers make it hard for you to upcycle your phone. Often they like you having to buy a new phone instead of renewing your current one. Some even want to prevent you from flashing your phone by using heavy digital restriction management.

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To be able to install a custom ROM, you sometimes need to unlock the bootloader of your device. The bootloader is an underlying software level on top of which you install the operating system. Some phones are easy to unlock the bootloader, others are not. Some custom ROMs can be installed without unlocking the bootloader, others not. Please note that we cannot offer you online or remote help with this process. But you are welcome to participate in one of our workshops.

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To be able to install a custom ROM, you sometimes need to unlock the bootloader of your device. The bootloader is an underlying software level on top of which you install the operating system. On some phones it is easy to unlock the bootloader, others not. Some custom ROMs can be installed without unlocking the bootloader, others not. Please note that we cannot offer you online or remote help with this process. But you are welcome to participate in one of our workshops.

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Be aware that manufacturers often like to scare you away from flashing your phone by claiming that you void your warranty. Following the analysis of the FSFE's legal experts this is however not true.

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Be aware that manufacturers often like to scare you away from flashing your phone by claiming that you void your warranty. Following the analysis of the FSFE's legal experts this is, however, not true.

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If you are currently in need to buy a new phone it is recommendable to choose your phone also based on its easiness for future upcycling. Not only do you make yourself a more easy time but also do you support more open phones with your choice. As a general note meanwhile there are alo several phones that come with a custom ROM pre-installed. This is of course the easiest option since they took away all the burden already and offer you an easy-to-use experience.

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If you currently need to buy a new phone it is recommended to choose your phone also based on its easiness for future upcycling. Not only do you make an easier time for yourself but also you support more open phones with your choice. There are also several phones that come with a custom ROM pre-installed. This is of course the easiest option since they take away all the burden and offer you an easy-to-use experience.

Discovering the world of Free Software

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Free Software is what runs most part of our digital infrastructure, and our devices. The Internet heavily relies on the innovations and accessibility of Free Software. And during the last decade it also became of ever growing importance and availability on your phone.

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Free Software is what runs most of our digital infrastructure and our devices. The Internet heavily relies on the innovations and accessibility of Free Software. And during the last decade it also became of ever growing importance and availability on your phone.

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Free Software comes with a lot of benefits. Free Software is available and can be used studied, shared and improved by anyone at anytime. No restrictions involved. This is one of its core characteristics that in practice also help to extend usage lifetime of electronic devices - as outlined in our study. And Free Software is also good for your privacy. It helps you to keep control over your data. And, as you can see on this page, it also helps you to reduce e-waste and to upcycle your phone.

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Free Software comes with a lot of benefits. Free Software is available and can be used, studied, shared, and improved by anyone at any time. No restrictions involved. This is one of its core characteristics that in practice also helps to extend the usage lifetime of electronic devices - as outlined in our study. And Free Software is also good for your privacy. It helps you to keep control over your data. And, as you can see on this page, it also helps you to reduce e-waste and to upcycle your phone.

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After upcycling your phone and installing a Free Software operating system on it you have the choice to manually post-install any other Android software on the phone, including proprietary software that might effect your freedom and privacy. For example could you re-install the Google software and libraries again. But you do not have to! Keep control over your software and data and use your phone with as many Free Software apps as possible. For many users, upcycling their phones are just the beginning of a long journey into a world full of Free Software.

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After upcycling your phone and installing a Free Software operating system on it you have the choice to manually post-install any other Android software on the phone, including proprietary software that might affect your freedom and privacy. For example, you could re-install the Google software and libraries again. But you do not have to! Keep control over your software and data and use your phone with as many Free Software apps as possible. For many users, upcycling their phones is just the beginning of a long journey into a world full of Free Software.

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Any proprietary app that you can replace with a Free Software one is an important step towards a more sustainable digital environment. Because any Free Software app you download and install will attract developers on the other hand to invest more resources in further development of the app. And any proprietary app that is replaced with a Free Software app is one step out of the dilemma of software obsolescence - as outlined in our study On the Sustainability of Free Software.

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Any proprietary app that you can replace with a Free Software one is an important step towards a more sustainable digital environment, because any Free Software app you download and install will attract developers on the other hand to invest more resources in further development of the app. And any proprietary app that is replaced with a Free Software app is one step out of the dilemma of software obsolescence - as outlined in our study On the Sustainability of Free Software.

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Discovering the full world of Free Software on your mobile phone with ease usually works with a Free Software app store called F-Droid and a replacement for the Google libraries called MicroG. If you are looking for enjoyable and useful apps you can find inspiration by browsing the F-Droid store or you watch out for curated third-party catalogues like Fossdroid or Droid-Break.

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Discovering the full world of Free Software on your mobile phone with ease usually works with a Free Software app store called F-Droid and a replacement for the Google libraries called MicroG. If you are looking for enjoyable and useful apps you can find inspiration by browsing the F-Droid store or you can watch out for curated third-party catalogues like Fossdroid or Droid-Break.

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