From 291bbc44b0afb3fcc5854b1f02fc4f8740514e14 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lammi87 Date: Wed, 29 Jan 2014 14:03:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Activities: Education: leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml: Fixed some typos. svn path=/trunk/; revision=27736 --- activities/education/leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/activities/education/leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml b/activities/education/leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml index 1423b1d6b0..75ddc77b66 100644 --- a/activities/education/leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml +++ b/activities/education/leaflet-edu-reasons-general.en.xhtml @@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ and thus join a whole community that shares knowledge.

Equality at home

- With Free Software, teachers can give a copy to each student. Thus children -of families with few financial resources can learn with the same tools as every -other child. + With Free Software, teachers can give a copy of a program to each student. +Thus, children of families with few financial resources can learn with the same +tools as every other child.

Learning to program

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ language or cultural barriers.

Teaching children to rely on proprietary software makes them dependent on a software vendor. Teaching them to rely on Free -Software, the children can continue using this software in their adult +Software allows them to continue using this software in their adult life while helping others by sharing it. Using and teaching Free Software also makes the school itself independent from software companies.