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@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ and thus join a whole community that shares knowledge.
     <h2>Equality at home</h2>
 
     <p>
-     With Free Software, teachers can give a copy to each student. Thus children 
-of families with few financial resources can learn with the same tools as every 
-other child.
+     With Free Software, teachers can give a copy of a program to each student. 
+Thus, children of families with few financial resources can learn with the same 
+tools as every other child.
     </p> 
 
     <h2>Learning to program</h2>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ language or cultural barriers.
 
     <p>Teaching children to rely on proprietary software makes them
 dependent on a software vendor. Teaching them to rely on Free
-Software, the children can continue using this software in their adult
+Software allows them to continue using this software in their adult
 life while helping others by sharing it. Using and teaching Free
 Software also makes the school itself independent from software companies.
     </p>