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include suggestions by Carmen and Torsten from git pull issue

Max Mehl 1 year ago
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         Most mobile devices are not controlled by the users, but by the manufacturer
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         and the operator. The software that runs on them is not Free Software.
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         Even Android phones ship with non-free software and proprietary add-ons
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-        that usually do not work in the full interest of the user. Software
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+        that often work against in the full interest of the user. Software
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         updates will only be made available as long as the manufacturer still has a
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         commercial interest in your device. The applications (apps) available
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         from the official market are commonly non-free. Nobody is

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       <h2 id="Apps">The Apps</h2>
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       <p>
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-        For most people, the <a href="https://market.android.com/">Google
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+        For most people, the <a href="https://play.google.com/">Google
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         Play Store</a> is the only or the main source for their
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         applications. It doesn't even tell you whether an app is Free Software
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         or not, let alone its license. Unfortunately, most apps from this or
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     <p>
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       Nowadways, we fortunately live in a world in which we can choose from
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-      various Free Software apps for almost any use case. However, this sections aims
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-      to present a small selection of apps which we made good experiences with for
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+      various Free Software apps for almost any use case. This sections aims
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+      to present a small selection of apps which are fitting for
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       starters. By no means can such a list be ever perfect for every individual
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       case. We also recommend you to look at the complete <a
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       href="https://f-droid.org/packages/">F-Droid repository</a> or app
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       knows public transportation networks of countries and cities all
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       over the world. <a
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       href="https://f-droid.org/packages/net.osmand.plus/">OsmAnd</a>
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-      serves detailled offline and online maps of whereever you are
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+      serves detailed offline and online maps of whereever you are
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       right now, and also includes navigation when riding your bicycle
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       or car.
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     </p>

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